Whither the state-of-the-nation novel? This is the question asked by Philip Henscher in the April edition of Prospect. It is a matter close to his heart: his new novel contributes to the genre he's assessing. The article starts off well, describing the many traits that define state-of-the-nation novels, tracing the trajectory of the form from the nineteenth-century (possibly Middlemarch) to the present day (Hanif Kureishi's Something To Tell You gets a battering). But Henscher's article loses course after the mid-way point, careering off into pedantic realms by pointing the reader's attention towards the ungrammatical writing in the examples he's discussing. I don't think this is particularly critical or helpful, and to be honest, there was an implication that throbbed beneath Henscher's pedantry: it's as if he was saying, 'you'll find none of this shoddy writing in my novel, which is out right now'.
But this is merely another example of an irritating trend in contemporary criticism. More to the point, though, is Henscher's pejorative reading of the way in which such standards of writing have been allowed to shape the form itself. In other words, he attacks Helen Walsh for her clichés and Hanif Kureishi for the misjudged diction in his dialogue, his habit of conflating incongruous historical details in the character's recollections, which thereby renders his representations implausible (the list goes on with Kureishi). Henscher is right to suggest (at the very end of his article) that popular music is used as a shortcut to authenticity, adding that not all people's view of the recent past is shaped in just this way. (I share with him the shaping influence of Mahler on one's formative years.) Though I agree with him there, I found myself tugged by his thoughts on the bearing of popular culture on contemporary life in general and state-of-the-nation novels in particular. There is something in the relationship between the cultural dominant of popular music and the novel that Henscher cannot reconcile himself with. I think his argument has to do with particularity; that the novel must strive to articulate universal themes (which historical forms like state-of-the-nation novels must do) through the particular. Hence Henscher's disdain for the genre's unreflective predilection for popular music as a shortcut to novelistic authenticity. It is just too popular, too communal, and therefore against interiority, the individual, and so on. The question is whether representations of contemporary life in the novel could exist without reference to a cultural dominant, such as popular music. Arguably, dwelling on one aspect of life devalues the texture of novelistic representation, so the question seems to be why Henscher's bugbears are so persistently represented in recent novels. The state-of-the-nation novel, with its panoramic view, must place questions about cultural dominants at the core of its enterprise.
The other issue which irritated me in Henscher's article was the unanalytical view of narration. Dragging his article down is his respect for good grammar, which he thinks should be spoken more by the characters in the ungrammatical books he discusses. Here's his ungenerous view of Helen Walsh's book, out now:
The urgency and declared weight of the subjects in these books has, in some cases, allowed the authors to overlook what ought to be paramount—the obligation to write well. Walsh is filled with cliché: "A stunned silence had descended"; "Though he was weary to the marrow of his bones…"
The comeback for this is the question about the status of the narrator. Who
is the narrator? In narratology circles, the question might rather be who is the
focaliser of this passage? Judging from the social milieu of Walsh's novel, is it likely or not whether such clichés are authentic expressions of the mind and subjectivity of this particular narrator or focaliser?
Henscher seems to think that clichés have no place in the novel. But have any of us has gone through our everyday lives without coming into earshot with, or actively articulating, clichés? Writing the demotic voice out of a form such as the state-of-the-nation novel would be like unpeopling the world, stripping away (I dare say, in such a clichéd manner) the everyday reality of contemporary life. Like life itself, as Martin Amis might say, clichés are well-worn. They
speak volumes.